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There are three things I need to do to be successful in Mollet’s class. First , I need to be on time every day. If I’m on time I get full credit. If I’m not on time I would only get half the credit. Second, I need to have all my work done on time and have it organized and completed so I can get an A his class.If I dont get an A in class I can always go back to that unit and try getting an A in class. Finally, I should always do your accelerator. One easy way to get ac his by doing all my work and getting an A. Like that you get max credit in his class. So by doing all those things in Mollet’s class I can be successful in his class.
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February 6, 2008 at 9:18 pm
Josue, you have come a long way with this paragraph, thanks for sticking to it.
My only concerns now are editorial. You have some spacing issues that should be easy to fix. After the period at the end of a sentence, you need to hit the space bar two times. This will help the reader distinguish between the two sentences. You still have a couple of you’s to switch to me’s.