final story
There once was a kid named Michael Rogers, his family never liked him.They always locked him in the basement for days ,one day on october 31, 1964.While Janet the little sister was out getting candy with Marie her little friend ,and dad had just came back from work and mom was making dinner and michael stuck down stairs waiting for dinner.When dinner was ready michael rushed up stairs to get some food while getting food mom had dropped a plate on the floor and made michael pick it up and if didn’t he wouldn’t eat for a week so he did but he was furious cause he did for something that his mom had dropped.
So michael after eating his dad said to get him a beer but he said so the dad told him again and yelled at him and said no again so then the dad got mad and grabbed him from his hair and hit him told him again to get a beer .
When they got home they saw that no one was home so the baby sitter stayed with till her family came home.Micheal didn’t hear them come in cause he was busy hangging the bodys.When he came back up stairs he saw the on the couch eatting candy the little sister said wheres mom and dad ,
Michael said” i dont know hangging around”.
Micheal wasn’t scared that his family was down stairs he wasn’t even worried about getting caught.
Then the babysitter went to the rest room and Micheal followed her when she came out and he slid her throat and dragged her body to the basement.The little sister got worried after she didnt’ come back she went back to look for her.She went down to the basement to tell micheal if his seen the babysitter.As she went down their she seen micheal hagging the body of the babysitter.
She “screamed”
And ran out side the neighbor called the cops when they came they arrested Micheal cause they thought he was a theif in the house.
But the little sister said “thats my brother”
so the cops say “ why did you come out of your house screaming” .
Cause of what I seen in the basement, she said.So the cops went down to the basement and saw the little girls whole family and the babysitter hangging and on the wall it said ” HAPPY HALLOWEEN”.
October 26, 2007 at 8:14 pm
No need to steal the name.
Please break your story into paragraphs. Look for places where you could give more details and show what is happening instead of telling what happened. “The child just snapped went to the kitchen and grabbed a butcher knife and started to kill his whole family” – this sentence could fill a few paragraphs with the right details.
October 31, 2007 at 3:25 pm
You need to check your spelling jesus
Ashley